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| BEFORE The Great Lakes- St. Lawrence Lowland is Aptly Named as the Heartland of Canada The Great Lakes – St. Lawrence Lowlands is the smallest region in Canada, but it is the most thoroughly occupied and developed section. In this small region, it is where most Canadians live, and where the majority of manufactured goods are produced. As shown in the map, this area extends north eastward from the southwestern part of the province along the shore of the Saint Lawrence River to the Quabec City region. It provides lots of natural resources, and transportation routes that facilitate trade (Andrew, Griffin & Mader, 2004). Therefore, such a favorable location is later named as the Heartland of Canada because of the rich soil and the developmental industries that found in this area. As a result, it might be worth pondering the major element that makes this region to become the Heartland of Canada. This paper will not only take a closer look at how commerce thrived in the Great Lakes- St. Lawrence Lowlands, but will also examine natural resources that discovered in this significant region. | AFTER The Great Lakes - St. Lawrence Lowlands is Aptly Named as the Heartland of Canada The Great Lakes – St. Lawrence Lowlands is the smallest region in Canada, but it is the most thoroughly occupied and developed section. It is within this small region where most Canadians live and where the majority of manufactured goods are produced. As shown in the map, this area extends north, eastward from the southwestern part of the province, along the shore of the Saint Lawrence River all the way to the Quebec City region. There is an abundance of natural resources and transportation routes that facilitate trade (Andrew, Griffin & Mader, 2004). As a result, due to its favorable location, it later was identified as the Heartland of Canada because of the rich soil and the developmental industries that were available in the area. As a result, it might be worth pondering the major elements that contributed to the region being known as the Heartland of Canada. This paper will not only take a closer look at how commerce thrived in the Great Lakes- St. Lawrence Lowlands, but will also examine natural resources that were discovered in this significant region. |
| BEFORE Chiapas Media Project 1998 Mexico The Chiapas Media Project is an organization focus on promotes democracy and human rights for rural communities in Latin America through use of media technology. Its’ primary beneficiaries are Chol, Tzeltal, Tzotzil, Tojolabal communities. I have strong confidant that this project has applied participatory paradigm and method in communication development instead of the dominant modernization paradigm after evaluating the brief context of the organization. I will evaluate and reflect several important aspects of the organization to justify Chiapas Media Project acts within the participatory paradigm. | AFTER The Chiapas Media Project 1998 Mexico The Chiapas Media Project is an organization focused on promoting democracy and human rights for rural communities in Latin America through the use of media technology. Its’ primary beneficiaries include Chol, Tzeltal, Tzotzil, and Tojolabal communities. I am very confident that this project has applied participatory paradigms and methods in communication development instead of the dominant modernization paradigms after evaluating the brief context of the organization. I will evaluate and reflect several important aspects of the organization to justify The Chiapas Media Project acts within the participatory paradigm. |
| BEFORE Psychology Lab Report Introduction Despite internet and electronic media play a key role in this information age, communicate with real people is still an unshakeable way to perceiving information. Compare to the electronic data, are people more often make mistakes? Are the message we think we’ve gotten from other people is what they really want to told us? We make decisions by the information we’ve got, and these decisions will lead us to a totally different ending in our life path. So, recognize the information is truly what others want to told us or just we project our emotion to the world are significant in our life. Recently year, more scientist put their focus on different Facial expression recognition between different group of people. In an cognitive task experiment, researcher Leppanen, J.M(2003) found “depressed patients recognized neutral faces significantly less accurately than either happy or sad faces”. However, their perception of happy and sad faces are accurate as same as the control group. | AFTER Psychology Lab Report Introduction Despite the fact that internet and electronic media play key roles in this age of information, communication with real people is still one of the most efficient ways to perceive information effectively. Compared to electronic data, do people make mistakes more often? Are the messages that we receive from other people what they really want to tell us? We frequently make decisions based on the information that we receive and the decisions that we make from them will lead us to completely different outcomes in our path of life. We need to consider whether the information we receive is truly what others are conveying to us or are we just projecting our personal emotions to meanings that are only significant to our own lives. In recent years, more scientists have put their focuses on different facial expression recognitions between different groups of people. In a cognitive task experiment, researcher Leppanen, J.M(2003) found that “depressed patients recognized neutral faces significantly less accurately than either happy or sad faces”. However, their perception of happy faces and sad faces are accurate and the same as the control group. |
| BEFORE An Overview of Early Childhood curriculum reform since 1980s in China Introduction & rationale for the topic Michael Crichton, the author of Jurassic Park, once said, “If you don’t know the history, then you don’t know anything. You are a leaf that doesn’t know it is part of a tree”. Unless we have a clear understanding of our past, we have no way to understand what forces and factors shape us to be who we are and what relationship our history has regarding to who we are trying to be. The same principle applies to the education reform that is taking placing in China. Chinese government has been advocating for education reform since 1980s along with the economic reform. It is crucial and beneficial for reform advocator to know the course of history and the significant policies that shape the culture and environment norm around their practice in order for them to know their place in time and to advance. This paper will provide an overview of historical context for the education reform in China. It will highlight the two significant policies that drive the education reform since the 1980s and the discrepancy between these policies and teacher practice base on relevant literature review. Lastly, this paper will discuss the opportunities to develop pre-service and in-service teacher training and possible direction for further study and investigation. | AFTER An Overview of Early Childhood Curriculum Reform Since the 1980’s in China An Introduction & Rationale for the Topic Michael Crichton, the author of Jurassic Park, once said, “If you don’t know the history, then you don’t know anything. You are a leaf that doesn’t know it is part of a tree”. Unless we have a clear understanding of our past, we have no way of understanding what forces and factors shape us to be who we are and what relationship our history has in regards to who we are trying to be. The same principle applies to the education reform that is taking placing within China. The Chinese government has been advocating for education reform since the 1980’s along with economic reform. It is crucial and beneficial for the reform advocator to know the course of history and the significant policies that shape the cultural and environmental norms surrounding their practice in order for them to know their place in time and for further advancement in their field. This paper will provide an overview of the historical context for education reform within China. It will highlight two significant policies that drove the education reform since the beginning of the 1980’s and the discrepancy between these policies as well as teacher practices based on relevant literature reviews. Lastly, this paper will discuss the opportunities in developing pre-service and in-service teacher training while delving into possible directions for further studies and investigations. |
| BEFORE Urban Studies Cities and nature together illustrate how the city is part of environment, and how it is the main subject to the environment therefore there is a close relationship between cities and nature. The word nature contains various uses and within these different uses nature often refers to geology and wildlife. Cities where the majority of the world populations are living at are also involved in the nature. We as human beings use various kinds of recourses from the nature to create the cities in this natural environment and make it a subject to environmental constraints and opportunities. And also nowadays because the cities are growing extremely fast and under a high rate development of the cities, urbanization becomes an important path to a sustainable future. | AFTER Urban Studies The existence of both cities and nature together illustrate how the city is not only part of the environment, but also how it is the main subject which reveals that there is a close relationship between the two. The word nature contains various uses and within these different uses it is often referring to geology and wildlife. In cities, where the majority of the world population is living, it is also involved in nature. We as human beings use various kinds of resources from nature to create the cities in this natural environment and make it subject to environmental constraints and opportunities. Moreover, because cities are growing extremely quickly and under a high rate development, urbanization becomes an important path to a sustainable future. |
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